Kia Ora Akoi , I like how your character's look and how descriptive it is.Next time you should do more information so it looks like a good story. What site did you do this on?
Please structure your comments as follows: Positive - Something done well Thoughtful - A sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say Helpful - Give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about
Kia ora akoi
ReplyDeleteI love how this relies on real life
How did you make this?
Oh Thank you.
DeleteI've also seen your story it is amazing.
How are you so good at it?
Kia ora Vai,
DeleteOh thank you, this really does sometimes happen in real life.
I made this on an online site called Storyboard.
Akoi
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ReplyDeleteKia Ora Akoi , I like how your character's look and how descriptive it is.Next time you should do more information so it looks like a good story. What site did you do this on?
ReplyDeleteKia ora Noah,
DeleteThank you.
And also thank you for your advice, so next time I can have more information.
I made this on an online site, Storyboard.
Akoi