Kia ora Akoi it's me George. I have finished reading your writing about turning Negative into positive and I just want to say how great it is, because you put so much information and I also like the way you put transition in it, that was really creative. So keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Akoi, I really like the way you put difficult transitions into your slide. I finished reading your writing about turning negative to positive and I just want to say this writing was great because you put a lot effort in your writing. I like the way you put transition in it that are really creative. So keep up the good work.
Kia Ora Akoi I read your turning positive into negative, it was really fun and nice to read but your background was a little too dark to read your text. Especially when your putting you ticks and exś on your writing. But besides that it was really good. When you were writing your positives what made you come up with what you came up with?
Kia ora Akoi I really liked the way you know your negatives and positives but I think you need to brighten the post a little bit cause I can't really see it but you are so creative I really like it Akoi nice work.
I really like your turning negative to positive. I liked the information you put in your turning negative to positive. The thing I liked about it is when you put in speech marks and full stops. Next time you could change the color of the background and make it more visible.
Kia Ora Akoi it me Maziyah.I was reading Negative to positive and it was great I like the transition that are creative. I also like to thank you for showing how to change Negative into Positive. You also do a hard work and keep it up
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Kia ora Akoi it's me George. I have finished reading your writing about turning Negative into positive and I just want to say how great it is, because you put so much information and I also like the way you put transition in it, that was really creative. So keep up the good work.
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Akoi, I really like the way you put difficult transitions into your slide.
ReplyDeleteI finished reading your writing about turning negative to positive and I just want to say this writing was great because you put a lot effort in your writing.
I like the way you put transition in it that are really creative. So keep up the good work.
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I liked what you wrote and I thought it was cool.. Did you think about covering the words thinner?
ReplyDeleteKia Ora Akoi I read your turning positive into negative, it was really fun and nice to read but your background was a little too dark to read your text. Especially when your putting you ticks and exś on your writing. But besides that it was really good. When you were writing your positives what made you come up with what you came up with?
ReplyDeleteBula vinaka this is me Rangi and I loved the way you have transitions and wonderful writing and i love how you put a cross and a tick on it.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Akoi I really liked the way you know your negatives and positives but I think you need to brighten the post a little bit cause I can't really see it but you are so creative I really like it Akoi nice work.
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ReplyDeleteI really like your turning negative to positive. I liked the information you put in your turning negative to positive. The thing I liked about it is when you put in speech marks and full stops. Next time you could change the color of the background and make it more visible.
Kia Ora Akoi it me Maziyah.I was reading Negative to positive and it was great I like the transition that are creative. I also like to thank you for showing how to change Negative into Positive. You also do a hard work and keep it up
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